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Preliminary The Safety Dance - First 1 Minute Draft

September 07, 2016

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A2 Coursework Final Draft; Beyond Reality

This is the final cut of our A2 Coursework after making changes to our rout cut from information gained on our audience feedback.

Audience Feedback on Rough Cut

We got feedback from a fair few people, and we realised that some patterns emerged in what people were saying. See below all of our feedback comments: Some of the most common things said were what we expected, e.g. background noise on some clips is quite prominent, the narration comes in too fast, some repetition. We knew when we finished our rough cut that some of these things would be said, as they were things we were not happy with ourselves. In response to these, we plan to edit our film best we can to improve it e.g. stabilise some clips, reduce the background noise, and add some more fades and transitions to slow down the narration. Without re-filming, we cannot get rid of some of the repetition of the questions asked/the answers. We would like to stay away from re-filming. One or two people said they felt the film "dragged a bit". There is not really much we can do about this - documentaries are not everyone's cup of tea. Some suggested perhaps adding a plo...

Shot List

We tried to use a variety of shots during filming, but at the same time we did not want anything to look overly staged, as we were creating a documentary. Some of the shots we used quite frequently were; Tracking shots - where we followed behind our presenter or walked with our presenter and subject as they talked. Pull focus - this is where we changed the focus from one thing to another in a single shot. We did this a few times and it helped to make our clips more dynamic, as well as added emphasis to different things. Rule of 3 - this isn't a type of shot exactly, but we did think about the composition of our characters within the frame e.g. when they are sat on the bench talking and during the time lapse Time-lapse - we did two of these and they worked well, this is where a long period of time is sped up into a few seconds. Close-ups - this is where the camera zooms in close to a person, usually the face. We did this during the city location. This ...

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